The republican in me says the crown should go though.

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Welcome to the forums Dave. Some nice work there. I noticed you didn't include logos for WSW, MC and BR, would like to see your take on those ones as well. 

Not that I can speak for him but those 3 logos are the best ones we have so probably thought they don't need to be touched. They are much more football specific rather than the clipart logos most other clubs have.

It is all a big improvement on what is on offer atm, what we have now is a bit too cartoon style and as someone else said your designs are more mature.

That's the main reason I'd like to see his take. The current WSW logo is great and I don't think it needs much improvement, so I am curious how(or if) it can be improved upon. Personally the BR lion reminds me of the Peugeot logo, and could be more unique and original. Conceptually the MC logo makes sense, but it isn't the most aesthetically pleasing logo out there. 

Beat me to it...

I like most, Phoenix could be bigger for the 'Nix. Never been a big fan of our logo, it was designed by Terry's brother.

Actually youre right come to think of it... i saw it as an immediate improvement on our bubble-like current logo... but now all i see is vic pol in both designs. Thanks a lot tsf lol

And yeah as others have alluded the crown is left field..

Edit. and the FC looks isolated down the bottom on its own...

thanks mate, haha how the feck did I miss that! 

Cheers mate.
Nope, didn't touch Bris since they re-did theirs and I don't mind it. might have crack at some point though

yeeaaah haha I couldn't be bothered creating a different version of the stars / ball at the time so just placed that in as a placeholder. I figured it got the point across until I got around to it (which I'm currently messing around with at the moment)

Yeah, I purposely gave it a nod to the union jack, as much as we like to take the piss out of the poms, I thought a bit of a nod to our colonial roots might be nice. I was probably wrong though haha

I was tossing up whether or not to include the crown, put it in since Melb was formed as 'crown colony' so a nod to the cities heritage, but I agree maybe not as relevant to the current supporters. Hard to know what all the supporter groups really think about what their club represents so I was hoping posting this would give some insight.

I'll pop up a version without the crown. 

I wouldn't mind seeing Adelaide and the mariners adopt those I think they are definitely better then there logos now.

You could substitute the crown for the "Victorian" southern cross that appears on the state flag. Which is different from the national flag (points on stars)

Adelaide one is awesome I think. The Victory Sydney CCM and Wellington look great. Looking forward  to the tweaks coming.

Would the A-League logo colour perhaps look better being green and gold or the colour of the flag? I can't put it in my mind but seeing and image would help to see if it's even worth changing.

I like most of them, great job Dave. I do agree with toffee when he says they lack individual flavour though I guess that's difficult to achieve when it's a one person job. Great work.

I'd say very few Victory fans are the type to have a hard on for Imperial or Colonial history and symbolism. 

Needs more Eureka flag lel.

-PB

Not real keen on the A-League logo - I very much like it (and the typeface) as is - but some of the TV graphics look very nice.

Crests? I reckon that Newcastle and Wellington actually have two of the better logos getting around - and I hate those clubs - Central Coast isn't an improvement even we really need one, but the Sydney FC one is pretty good.

Crazy how a fella on a forum can do a better graphic design job then the people in charge.

-PB

FFA should get in contact with you ASAP! some of these are outstanding, particularly the A-league logo, CCM and Sydney fc.

Not a fan of Newcastle and Wellington though. I think the current ones are better though, sorry.

Overall, you certainly got talent.

And like i said try one without the fc isolated at the bottom... and tsf raises a valid point about it looking like vic pol.. dunno what could be done to alleviate it.. im suspecting thats why the orig designers went the way of bubbling-out the crest in the first place.. perhaps a completely different shaped emblem could work...like circular, for lack of a better suggestion...

Good efforts Dave. I'm not going to knock them at all but... as an Adelaide United supporter that design does nothing for me. I think AU def need a redesign but aside from the shape of the shield and the font I wouldnt fiddle with the current one as on a nice red shirt and on black it looks pretty fab. The state tricolour tape or ribbon is pretty neat and other than that I prefer just seeing lots of red and yellow and black as AU are not a state team but the tricolour thing just gives a simple nod to where the club is from.

I would like to see AU come up with a really ornate alternate crest though too.

Phoenix and Mariners are two I would just fiddle the original as well. Phoenix itself needs to spread its wings and wrap around the crest, not be so contained within the shape of it. Other than that I like it.

And Mariners circle football wave logo is an absolute classic I reckon. just ditch the silly font and wrap words around it in a circle like you've done with the AU logo and that would suit it better.

Hal logo is great. Vic looks good. Jets is an improvement I think as well.

Good work.

The only think I didn't like was "our game, our way"

We are part of something big and great and that's why people watch. Any attempt to be the black sheep of football simply alienates us from our fan base - evident with the ~78% of registered players ignoring the game

If it were me, I'd make the tagline "It's Australia's Premier League" or simply "Australia's Premier League"

Otherwise we might as well borrow from the "Un-McDonalds" advertising and have something like "A top 6 in a 10 team competition? How very un-football". "A rigged national cup draw to guarantee an underdog? How very un-football"

Lol. agree. appeal to peoples intelligence rather than insult/underestimate it. Ffa should let them know that they know that they know lol